Critiquing

This isn't a review for Speak (unfortunately), but it is a little writing/critiquing update. I finally got around to looking over the pages my critique partner, Laura, sent over to me. I've only had them for about a week and a half now (sorry, Laura!). She made some changes to the first section I looked over and I think they turned out much better. I'm not even saying that because she took all my suggestions - it looks like she has some other good CP's, too.

It's fun reading her stuff because she's British and uses awesome words like "arsehole." Oh, how I wish I could work that into my WIP somehow.

Anyway, thanks, Laura, for being so patient with me. I'll try to finish up tonight or tomorrow and send everything over to you. Great job!

-- Lisa

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